[oe-commits] org.oe.documentation recipes.xml: improve some awkward wording.

[Laibsch commit]

recipes.xml: improve some awkward wording.

Author: Laibsch at openembedded.org
Branch: org.openembedded.documentation
Revision: 65e93af222594499f5515df442c35bc9a528d94d
ViewMTN: http://monotone.openembedded.org/revision.psp?id=65e93af222594499f5515df442c35bc9a528d94d
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usermanual/chapters/recipes.xml
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# patch "usermanual/chapters/recipes.xml"
#  from [b3f67bdbc1bf9c2fd04f7c3df755da98505da5be]
#    to [5cf33de6ea6c5588a6d15c1503de01c8b1b130a6]
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--- usermanual/chapters/recipes.xml	b3f67bdbc1bf9c2fd04f7c3df755da98505da5be
+++ usermanual/chapters/recipes.xml	5cf33de6ea6c5588a6d15c1503de01c8b1b130a6
@@ -2001,8 +2001,7 @@ NOTE: package helloworld-0.1-r0: task do
       matched via wildcards. Consider the case where we have three binaries in
       the /usr/bin directory and we want the test program in a separate
       package:<screen>/usr/bin/programa /usr/bin/programb /usr/bin/test</screen>So
-      we define are now package, list the file and included in the list of
-      packages:</para>
+      we define a new package and instruct bitbake to /usr/bin/test in it.</para>
 
       <screen>FILES-${PN}-test = "${bindir}/test"
 PACKAGES += "FILES-${PN}-test"</screen>
@@ -2020,7 +2019,7 @@ PACKAGES += "FILES-${PN}-test"</screen>
       processing of the <emphasis role="bold">${PN}-test</emphasis>
       package.</para>
 
-      <para>To make these work we have two options:</para>
+      <para>To achieve what we are trying to accomplish we have two options:</para>
 
       <orderedlist>
         <listitem>