[oe] [PATCH 2/7] Usermanual/comparing: Fix documentation errors
Stefan Schmidt
stefan at datenfreihafen.org
Wed May 26 06:48:53 UTC 2010
On Wed, 2010-05-26 at 08:17, Koen Kooi wrote:
> From: Chase Maupin <chase.maupin at ti.com>
>
> * Fixed up typos and other errors in the documentation.
>
> Signed-off-by: Chase Maupin <chase.maupin at ti.com>
> Signed-off-by: Koen Kooi <k-kooi at ti.com>
Non-native speaker ack:
Acked-by: Stefan Schmidt <stefan at datenfreihafen.org>
> ---
> docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml | 18 +++++++++---------
> 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml b/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml
> index 1347010..cfdaa95 100644
> --- a/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml
> +++ b/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml
> @@ -5,13 +5,13 @@
> <section id="comparing_buildroot">
> <title>buildroot</title>
>
> - <para>Writing of <application>BitBake</application> recipes is more easy
> + <para>Writing of <application>BitBake</application> recipes is easier
> and more intuitive than writing Makefiles while providing higher
> flexibility. This allows you to tweak specific recipes for your very
> - special needs and to add new recipes very fast. You can build toolchains,
> + special needs and to add new recipes quickly. You can build toolchains,
> Software Distribution Kits (SDKs), complete Distributions or just single
> - packages. The flexibility of OpenEmbedded allows you to reuse the once
> - written recipes for many different purposes. OpenEmbedded provides
> + packages. The flexibility of OpenEmbedded allows you to reuse recipes
> + for many different purposes. OpenEmbedded provides
> everything buildroot will be able to provide. But in contrast to buildroot
> OpenEmbedded will allow you to achieve what you really want to achieve.
> You can add new package formats, new filesystems, new output formats
> @@ -21,11 +21,11 @@
> <section id="comparing_crosstool">
> <title>crosstool</title>
>
> - <para>Crosstool allows to create toolchains for you. It can only create
> + <para>Crosstool allows the creation of toolchains. It can only create
> the initial toolchain for you. It will not compile other needed libraries
> - or applications for you, it will not be able to track dependencies or to
> + or applications for you, it will not be able to track dependencies or
> package them properly. OpenEmbedded supports all configurations crosstool
> - supports. You can start to create toolchains with OpenEmbedded, then as
> + supports. You can start by creating toolchains with OpenEmbedded, then as
> your needs grow create a more complete SDK from already present base
> libraries and applications and if you recognize you need to have packages
> for the target you have them almost built already.</para>
> @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
> cross-compiling is hard itself but many people misuse the buildsystem they
> use to build their software. This will lead to a variety of issues you can
> run into. This can be failing tests on configuration because of executing
> - cross compiled binaries or crashes at run-time due wrong sizes of basic
> + cross compiled binaries or crashes at run-time due to wrong sizes of basic
> types. When utilizing OpenEmbedded you avoid searching for patches at many
> different places and will be able to get things done more quickly.
> <application>OpenEmbedded</application> allows you to choose from a pool
> @@ -48,4 +48,4 @@
> output formats and filesystems. This allows you to create complete and
> specialized distributions easily.</para>
> </section>
> -</chapter>
> \ No newline at end of file
> +</chapter>
> --
> 1.7.0
>
>
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